"A Writing Workout"
Writing is revising, and revising some more. Ask any writer and he or she will probably tell you it's extremely hard work. The deadlines are endless, corrections take up a whole lot of time. Is my lead strong enough? Do I have enough conflict in the story to keep the reader reading?
Believe it or not, sometimes writing non-fiction articles is harder than fiction. It's a game of perfection for most writers. What makes the story flow, and what trips it up? Can a mundane comment ever work in a story? Sometimes just getting a quote is a problem. Most interview subjects don't have an eloquent answer to your question, and will say a lot of words that just don't make a good quote. In that instance it is best to paraphrase so that neither one of you looks like a fool.
It's your reputation on the line, and it's important that concise words and phrases are used as well.
I've recently finished two very long feature articles that have to have a punch,kick, flavor, and a whole lot of reader interest to make this publication take off with the first edition. I want to see it fly, higher than the cute kites that I've watched meander towards the heavens.........

